Sunday, May 20, 2012


Autumn Leaves
Look ok
I like autumn stuff.
They sound like flowers
And smell like flowers too.
They feel soft and I like soft.
I like autumn.
By Haylee
Autumn Leaves
Look brown and red,
Sound good when you crack them,
Smell good
Feel crunchy.
The leaves change.
By Dylan
Autumn Leaves
Look pretty on the tree
Sound crunchy
Smell lovely
Feel rippy.
I like autumn.
By Maddison
Autumn Leaves                          
Look sad, look spotty                                   
Sound like ripping paper                                           
Smell like coffee                                            
Feel crunchy                                                    
Falling off the tree                                         
By Tom                                                              
Autumn Leaves
Look beautiful
I like the leaves.
Sound crackly
Smell stinky
Feel hard.
By Stella

Autumn Leaves                         
Look ok                                                             
I like autumn stuff.                                      
They sound like flowers                               
And smell like flowers too.                         
They feel soft and I like soft.                     
I like autumn.
By Haylee
Autumn Leaves
Look brown and red,
Sound crunchy and yuck,
Smell like sugar,
Feel crunchy.
Leaves fall of the trees.
By Gage
Autumn Leaves
  Look sad because they fall off. 
Sound crackly
Smell grassy
Feel gentle and light.
 I love autumn!!
By Kaea
Autumn Leaves
Look colourful and light
Sound crunchy   
Smell like coffee 
Feel crinkly
I like autumn.
By Charlotte

1 comment:

  1. I do like the interesting words you have used in your poems. Well done! I love Autumn colours.
    Mrs Duffin

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